Sunday, August 7, 2011

The Map

Chapter 1

One day there was 2 men that went to the library and checked out a book.  The title of the book was The Very Sorry Pirate.  But when they checked it out the librarian said "there is a bookmark, I will take it out."  It was an actual map.  It was a map to an island.  The librarian also said I will keep this map until a person comes up to me and says "do you have a map"? but the 2 men said we will take care of it.  We will take all of our time trying to find which person made it.  "Ok, but if I catch you trying to go where the ending is, you will be really busted" said the librarian.  "You have our word" said the 2 men.  So the librarian said "You have 1 chance."  "Ok" said 1 man.  So they got the map and started on their journey.



So they checked 3 people, but then they started to go where the starting was.  So they went on to the city and it was a long walk to the end of the city.  So, one day when they got bored they went into one of the buildings and they found a pipe.  So then went in the pipe and found a whole new world and it was made out of water and had pirate ships sailing through everything.  Then they found a forest that looked a lot like the one on the map.  So, they went through the forest and it seemed so much like a jungle because there were vines and other things that you would find in a jungle.  So, they started their journey through the forest.  They got really close to the ending of the jungle.


Chapter 2

So they finally made it through the jungle.  They walked for miles until they reached the mote castle.  They came closer, they went inside the mote castle and saw sharks in the mote and bats hanging from the door and other things that are haunting and scary.  So the 2 men went to see the inside of the castle.  It was haunted.  It was a castle with a king and a queen.  They were very mean.  They came across a man who said "very well, don't you wonder if we're mean?"  "yes" said the men.  "well, we are just prisoners and on the tenth floor you can find the king and the queen."  The 2 men said "how many floors are there"  "We don't know but there is a lot of them.  You have to be really sneaky because there are spotlights and you have to be really careful of the monkey.  he sees every floor and everybody.  he has a special room and millions of screens.  he sees the trash and all of the exit doors.  so you need to work together as a team" said one of the prisoners.    "so watch out for the monkey"

So, the 2 men started to walk up the winding stairs but then there was another set of stairs.  the men were confused.  one of the men said "wait there could be boobie traps and we could get caught by the monkey like one of the prisoners said"  but then there was a noise that sounded just like a monkey, but the guards came and almost got them both but they started running up one of the sets of stairs and they went up the right staircase.  The right staircase had the boobie traps.  But they ran fast.  One of the boobie traps they passed so fast so it caught the guards instead.   The 2 men went up the stairs to the tenth floor and made it past the king and the queen.  And then the king and the queen and the guards came and somehow they got out of the trap.  And then one of the two men saw a fox flying back that was bigger than 4 feet.  It was huge.

Chapter 3

So they found out there was 18 floors in the castle.  So they made it out of the castle and then they built a ship out of wood that they found in the castle.   And, they also found some wood on the outside of the castle.  So the 2 men set sail on the ocean water. First they could see a little fish.  It took one day to travel a half a mile.  Then the next day they found 2 paddles laying on the ocean top.  So one of the two men grabbed both of the paddles then the guy in the back got a hold of the paddles and started paddling in the ocean.  So then the next day they paddled five miles.  Then Sunday there was a stampede of dolphins in front of them.  Then they looked around and found a fin that was not jumping.  And at that very moment the fin that was not jumping jumped out of the water and the two men said "It's a shark!" Then the 2 men raced to a very far away place.  Till they were in the middle of nowhere.  Suddenly they found a hard shell and one of the two men said "hey, that's a hard turtle shell."

Chapter 4
So they made it somewhere but when there was a big chance of wind.  Then there was darkness at that very moment and at that time they figured that they were in a cave full of noises with the sounds of bats and bears.  But then they looked in the back of them and saw a bear almost ready to bite the boat.  But then the 2 men paddled back into the bear. But then they found that they had bats all over their boat they almost ran into a shark.  "A shark!  Oh my gosh!" said the 2 men.  "We almost ran into a shark".  "Wait that was a dolphin and a shark fighting".  So they paddled far away out of the way, but they didn't get to the light.  The light was 2 miles away.  The 2 men said that maybe they could get past the shark.  Maybe we could paddle to the end of the cave.  The 1 man on the right said "Wait!  I see light really back there! Maybe if we paddle a little bit faster we might get there faster"  "That's where we can get some light for a mile"  So they went very quiet and made it past the shark and the dolphin.


To be continued...

1 comment:

  1. Jenna, this story is so exciting. I am anxious to read more of the adventure. Love, Grandpa

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