Storymatic 2

Hello again and this is my second drawing of storymatic as I type this I am opening storymatic. The rules are to pick 2 gold cards and 2 bronze cards. I picked a wild card which means I have to the story from my perspective (I or me.)

Here is what I got out of it , I Jenna is a trespasser break into a mansion and find a box of teeth with a flashlight.

     One day I was walking down a street being me, a trespasser as I see a tall mansion with no lights on I scurry over to the front lawn to see what was happening. No one in sight. Atleast I didn't see anybody. I walked up the tall statues standing beside the big tall doors. I wonder why they would put such a tall door next to a big house. Wouldn't the house look bigger with a smaller door I ask myself. Anyway I walk strait up to the pale statues wondering who lives here.
     I see somebody turn on a light in a female shape. A maid I think. Somebody is inside the house.
     "Amazing!" I say out loud and the lights go off again and then back on. the lights turn back off and I'm headed inside. I walk up to the doors and I see theres a big problem, theres no doorknobs so I just crawl through the little doggy door. I grab my flashlight from out of my pocket and head inside. Its pretty dark inside so I turn on my flashlight and I know its not a good idea because if i'm in a dark mansion and a bright light shines, somebody is going to notice.
     I walk in with bright flashlight and look around I see a library and a kitchen and even a huge fountain in the center of the room. There is shelves and dusty knick-knacks which there shouldn't be because there is a maid who lives here. I walk through the kitchen and find a room with a lot of glass jars. But when you walk in one caught my eye. it was a box of teeth not a glass jar but a box, a cardboard box. I find it turn around and get out through the little doggy door and before somebody walks downstairs i'm out.


Here is my story and I hoped you were hooked and you liked the little correctments.

Here are the actual cards I pulled 1-4
1:trespasser
2:WILD CARD! tell your story in first person ( I, me). Pick another gold card
3:box of teeth
4:flashlight

StoryMatic

     This a story from a present that I got from my grandparents called storymatic it uses cards that you pick to make a story. I picked four cards. Heres what I got out of it.

    Theres a dentist named Bob who daydreams about being a cowboy to follow his star the Lone Ranger from the movie Lone Ranger. Bob goes to his local market and found is long-lost love, Claire from first grade. He soon realizes what Claire really was. A detective. At a police investigation he sees Claire and wants to know more about her.

 Thats what I got from four little gold cards but I made up the names so here is the story you've been wanting to here all your life.


         One day a Guy named Bob was driving to work in his blue work clothes when he started thinking of a cowboy he has seen on a movie the Lone Ranger. He wants to be a cowboy someday but he knows it will never happen so he pulls into the parking lot to Smile. The place he works at. He walks in and greets everybody in his low tone voice.
      " Hello." Bob says walking into his office. "Oh how I would love to be a cowboy." He finds himself talking into thin air as you might call it looking off into space. Bob was the nicest man at the Dentist office. But today was special it was mac' n ' cheese night for him. He works on somebodys teeth and that was his today. Being at work for only a half hour pays well.
       He drives home in his old stationwagon and pulls into his broken down ampartment. Hello beauty he says to his house. He walks in and makes his mac 'n' cheese. Yummy he thinks. He walks into his bedroom and lays on his sleeping bag ready for the next day at the dentist.
      Bob wakes up the next morning to a loud ringing noise.
    " Hello" says his phone. "Good morning." Bob wakes up and heads to the local store. He walks in and looks at a blonde headed girl with hazel eyes wearing a long black coat.
    "Claire he says."
    " Yes. Wait is that you Bob?"
    " Yes. It is I the great Bob!" He says in a cheerful voice.
    " Well I have to get going I need to head to work."
   " Ok well good to see you."
   " You to Bob. Have a nice day."
Bob doesn't reply though and Claire looks at him like hes dumb. Bob walks out with his breakfast and daydreams of being a cowboy. When he pulls into the house there is a white outline of a person on the sidewalk. Bob ignores the the white outline and runs into a stop sign infront of his house. He backs up and pulls into the driveway noticing a girl in a long black coat, hazel eyes and blonde hair. He gets out of his car walks over and stops behind the caution tape around the outline of a person.
    " Hello is that you Claire."
   " Yes."
   " I thought you had to go to work."
   " I am at work." pointing at her detective badge.
  " Oh." Bob walks away and finds his 1st grade crush a detective!

This is a story indeed a great story and ends with a cliffhanger. If are wondering the stuff at the top is not what I pulled exactly. Here are the cards I pulled 1-4

1: dentist
2:cowboy
3:long-lost love spotted in local store
4:police investigation

This is actually really going to help my creative writing now that I am in 5th grade